What I would suggest is put some more black paint arou d the eyes and whilst it still wet, spray over it with water and let it run down his face. Will give him a more screen accurate grimy look.
This looks way better than your original pictures. Massive transformation.
I think just some very light smudging perhaps on the right eye would look great.
Really great job
Thanks man. Iv pretty much finished the life size, just jazzing it up a little.
The bank robber im still working with. Trying to do the shirt and maybe add a bag with money